You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my feedback about the all-day meeting which is done two days ago at your hotel.I set up a skype call with participants who have invited meeting two days ago.I was glad to hear that they were satisfied with hotel facilities, such as staff welcoming and a comfortable meeting room.
On the other hand, I want to express the participant’s dissatisfaction with food that was served for lunch.All member has had a problem meal which is served as tasteless. Another problem is cleaning where are glasses and dish on the table.
I suggest you install food warmers for all the dishes, and not just for the gravies. I also recommend that you add some western dishes like pasta and toast to your menu.
I really hope that you will consider my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
Ridvan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hich is done two days ago at your hotel.I set up a skype call with participants w...
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...s who have invited meeting two days ago.I was glad to hear that they were satisfi...
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...ng and a comfortable meeting room. On the other hand, I want to express the...
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...are glasses and dish on the table. I suggest you install food warmers for a...
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...es like pasta and toast to your menu. I really hope that you will consider my s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91608391608 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77307778276 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706293706294 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6531775716 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39011224772 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117318703391 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102564133005 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168093936957 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104313094719 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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