You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter:Explain why you want to take time off work?Give details of the amount of time you need.Suggest how yo

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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.

In your letter:

Explain why you want to take time off work?

Give details of the amount of time you need.

Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr. James,

I am writing this letter to request you about the break I need from work for ten days and have some family time.

I am not finding time to spend with children daily because of work pressures. Hence, I would like to plan for a holiday for ten days, as my children have Diwali vacation for a period of fifteen days. To attain the quality time with family in a hectic schedule, I would like to ask you to grant me leave for ten days from 25th October to 5th November. Accordingly, we may book our tickets to Goa.

During my absence, I would guide one of my colleagues to handle the works. In case of emergency in technical issues if any, I will be available on call for the resolutions. I will be communicating through mails only when required.

I would be grateful to you if permission is granted for a period of ten days. As soon as I return I will complete all my jobs at the earliest.

Yours sincerely

Goerge Thomas

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on is granted for a period of ten days. As soon as I return I will complete all my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43502824859 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48959659893 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3497285108 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3636363636 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215467317782 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731025138818 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906601040252 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141267025124 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128501350199 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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