Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages
Nowadays, mega cities struggle more and more with various issues such as housing and transportation. As a solution, companies are persuaded to transfer their workplace to the countryside. This suggested approach has its own benefits and defects that will be discussed in the following.
On the on hand, the new trend to move businesses to rural areas will have a tremendous effect on the peaceful habitat of countryside. It not only takes a toll on the environment through construction projects but also disturb the tranquil life of local community. Individuals who opt to live in rural regions are often looking for a quiet and clean neighborhood while moving factories and different industries to those places will definitely result in a significant rise in rural area population. As employees who work for those moved businesses will be forced to endure a much longer commute or migrating to the countryside as well to get close to their offices. In addition, by constructing new building, nature will be threatened in so many ways. For example, trees must be cut down to make room for more offices, shopping centers, schools, and so on. Besides, migrated dwellers bring their vehicles to the street and contribute to more air and noise pollution. All in all, the quality of life for rural residents will decrease dramatically.
On the other hand, making businesses to evacuate urban areas improves the quality of life for city dwellers in several ways. Firstly, the concentration of people in inner cities will be vanished, which means less traffic jam in rush hours and thus less air pollution. Secondly, companies can make more profits and experience a huge increase in their income since housing is less expensive in rural areas. Additionally, government will offer them tax discounts to tempt more companies to follow their lead and leave the city. Furthermore, the change of environment can impact the migrated staffs too and at large improve their efficiency in the office. Although they have been forced to change their houses, they can acquire a better lifestyle in the beautiful countryside with less traffic and rent.
In conclusion, although moving businesses to the rural districts endangers the tranquility of those areas, it improves the urban quality of life. Therefore, in my opinion, the advantages of this solution undoubtedly outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9178150641 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5199769534 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.684210526 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1578947368 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127250691837 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388217914549 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463159885622 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840466189794 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666845893468 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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