When a country develop its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over recent decades,there has been and upcoming issues regarding development of technology that may have cause traditional skillls and people's way of life to die out. Some argues that nothing can be done to preserve this problem.
I completely agree That there is not a chance that people could apprehend this issue of technology taking over traditional methods.
Firstly, the traditional method is no longer applicable in this modern world,because of how the world has developed in terms of technology,it would be hard for aplicating the old lifestyle.For example: Soy sauce productiion in Japan.
The way of producing the mixture could consume almost 2 full year,whereas making it using machines only lasts about 6 months.As we can see here,the efficiency of time is far better than the old method.
Another point to consider is that we live in a time where competition is very high and only the best could survive.It explains that there are no room for the slow and old way of life,and they have to keep up with the technology there is to keep up with other people.For instance,it has been shown that people using more advanced technology in their work such as using computer have greater result than using old method such as writing in a blank paper.
To conclude,dealing with the globalization of technology is inevitable,and people need to keep up with the development if they wish to cope with the current world.Changing the way of living into more sophisticated way could help people to ease their every task and problems .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0546875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.982520096 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.339781975 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.857142857 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18934443305 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886342264459 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441813303978 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966135246544 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401425794107 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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