Science and Technology can solve all the problems in the society
Science and technology play a vital role in our existence. The immense number of discoveries done by people in the technology field have improved our daily life to that extent that now we can't imagine living without it. From making a clock to building a satellite, there is nothing today which is impossible to do with the help of science.
There was a time when people had no idea that there was a better way to improve the process with the help of technology, but today you can use technology for even the most simplest of things and can achieve faster, better and more reliable results. Let's take Google Maps for example, who would have thought that commuting in an entirely new country could become this simple with just an application. This application today helps you plan your commute, understand the most convenient mode of travel and discover places around you based on your needs.
Science and technology have come into the picture because of great scientist and their inventions, as humans we have the power to make them do anything we want. You can build a robot but you can't teach him to show empathy, these few things are just for the humanity and not something science can do.
Science and technology are very important and they will always be and with time they will become smarter than they are now and will help us solve issues. Science will help in uncovering all the aspects where humans can't reach but it will all be possible with the help of human brain only, as until we feed an algorithm or a method they won't work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r daily life to that extent that now we cant imagine living without it. From making ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'simplest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: simplest
...day you can use technology for even the most simplest of things and can achieve faster, bette...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ster, better and more reliable results. Lets take Google Maps for example, who would...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laces around you based on your needs. Science and technology have come into th...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... we want. You can build a robot but you cant teach him to show empathy, these few th...
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Line 13, column 216, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uncovering all the aspects where humans cant reach but it will all be possible with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66545454545 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32188581093 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9065354824 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196126244921 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755319411925 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577358769171 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112470787927 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358735459248 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.