Write a letter to the friend asking advice for an employment opportunity in his country
Why you are looking in his country
describe qualification and skills
ask some questions about salary, benefit culture etc.
Dear Tim,
How have you been since we last met?
I just wanted to inquire a few details about a position for a tour guide in your country that matches my skill-set.
As you already know, New York is the top-ranked tourist destination, and increasing tourism is the best way to expand my work network. There are also three new museums and a public building that is inaugurated this year, which gives me more options to explore job opportunities in this country.
I have recently completed my “USA tour guide association certificate” so that I can apply for jobs in the US tourist market. In total, my current experience as a tour guide is of 10 years, covering Europe and Middle East Asia. I am sure you remember that we could only go to the Mexico trip because of my Spanish skills but don’ be surprised as I have now added Cantonese and Mandarin languages as well in my resume along with french and german from my Europe tour experience.
There is a job opening that I am particularly interested in at the Metropolitan Museum of arts. Their language criteria and curator experience requirement is a perfect match for my resume. So, if you could let me know their working hours and office contact number, then it would be a great help in arranging the interview sooner.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best,
Ron
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you soon. Best, Ron
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81276595745 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74751956121 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655319148936 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9212649706 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.818181818 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579888944041 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225087850244 0.0766984524023 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.016429921626 0.0603063233224 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.03663951573 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106759038131 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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