Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which do you agree?
Whether advertisements encourage people to buy unnecessary things or help them to improve their lives has always been a topic of intense discussion. Although it can never be denied that commercials often leads to overspending however in my opinion adverts on the other hand impart knowledge in consumers regarding the benefits of a product and its impact on their lives. In the below paragraphs I will present some examples in support of my opinion.
To begin with most of the companies nowadays use adverts to showcase the benefits of their new products. For instance electronic appliances like rice cookers can cook rice in few minutes thus reducing the use of conventional gas stoves and saving a lot of time which can be used by individuals for leisure activities. Similarly advert of microwave showing how efficient and multifunctional it can be when compared to traditional gas stove is alluring people as it can save a lot of time which can be used for other activities. Additionally adverts provide a right comparison between competitive products thus making buying choice of an individual easy. Hence it is would be right to say that advertisement on new products is helping people to improve their daily lives.
On the contrary it is also said that adverts allure people in buying unnecessary items. While this may not be entirely true for most of the people, as per the recent survey done British leading newspaper times global it was mentioned only 7 percent of people in United Kingdom would overspend on buying items which they really don’t need.
To conclude the benefits of commercials on new products far outweigh the disadvantages therefore it would be rightful to say that such a practice will only benefit us in the longer run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, really, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04436860068 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86784073437 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8657608694 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209287656993 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828118138283 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704315621279 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121461762937 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123919408363 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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