Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
Universities and Educational institutes are considered to be the citadel for building successful future. There are many denizens who believe that the university students should study a wide variety of subjects however, there are some who believe that only few and specific subjects must be taught. Whether the universities should include a wide range of subjects or few paramount subjects? This will be discussed further in this essay.
Colleges and universities should include subjects like sports, physical education, arts and so on in its curriculum, as, it will help the students to rid themselves from the constant pressure and will improve their performance, Furthermore, many jobs and companies want their employees to be talented in multiple aspects. For instance, a bank accountant who not only to has to expertise in field like accountancy, tax but should also have knowledge about communication, management, customer queries handling so that they can handle multiple administration obligations in the organisation. Through teaching a wide range of subjects to the disciple’s academic universities will help them to build a successful future, as, it will be both personally fulfilling and skill enhancing.
On the other hand, albeit, introducing a wide variety of subjects will expand the student experience but in the long run it will not benefit them. The universities ' main goal is to transmit to the students specialized cognizance and not to improve their general knowledge in order to gain good job opportunities relevant to their abilities. Making students needless stress to study all the topics irrelevant to their profession will be an obstacle to reaching their future goals. For instance, if it will be obligatory for medical students to learn subjects like management, communication, leadership which is not related to their course, it will not be beneficial to the them in any way. Moreover, the average universities have more than 30 departments, who are intended to specialise the students in determined expertness and not to make Jack of all trade only to provide mediocre professionals and besides it will be infeasible for the academic institutes to finish the entire course if irrelevant subjects are included.
To conclude, Universities main responsibility is to specialise the students in their specific fields and areas of their interest and should therefore include relevant subjects, whereas, by including wide variety of irrelevant subjects will detriment the meaning of the university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49489795918 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15884730978 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502551020408 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2375966555 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.692307692 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146948832229 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645409039035 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518650736012 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11453832701 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559926118569 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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