Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a
small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
You need to explain the following:
1. When and where you hired it?
2. Describe how the accident happened?
3. What kind of action did you take after the accident?
Dear Manager, Holiday car Rental,
I am writing to inform you regarding an unwanted accident with the Toyota Camry 2010 which I hired from your company for one week my vacation on the 25th of October.
Hopefully, you can remember, I wanted a smooth and well-maintained sedan car for my family get-away because both of my kids are a toddler and they need a cozy vehicle to ride on. finally, you gave me that car and initially, I was also pleased to see the outlook of it. However, when I was driving towards Mawa Ghat, in the middle of the highway the engine has got overheated and broken down. To my utter disappointment, it was a horrible situation under the midday summer sun. I could not find any mechanic shop nearby and finally, I towed the car back to Dhaka. it cost me ten thousand takas to repair in a local garage and I retained the original bill with me.
In this circumstance, I would like to get a refund of the amount that I have spent on the emergency repair for the car.
I am looking for your prompt reply.
Sincerely yours
A T M Jakir Alam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, Holiday car Rental, I am writing to inform you regarding an ...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eek my vacation on the 25th of October. Hopefully, you can remember, I wanted a ...
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Line 9, column 564, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...finally, I towed the car back to Dhaka. it cost me ten thousand takas to repair in...
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Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your prompt reply. Sincerely yours A T M Jakir Alam
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, look, regarding, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49494949495 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56883601612 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1864239814 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221429396805 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671183235402 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729094780816 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991213332091 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688545643141 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.