the use of social media,such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. DO you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
While I accept that social media sites facilitate communication between people, I also believe that they have some negative effects on social skills. Overall, I would argue that drawback in communication skills of these social media outweighs their benefits. On the one hand, one of those advantages is that social media might help people living far apart could interact with each other. For example, people post the latest news on facebook, which allows either their family or their friends to keep abreast of what has been happening and to nearly real interact by leaving their comments below the status. In addition, another advantage of those is that patients who have psychological problems such as autism could exchange pieces of information to other people more easily. On the other hand, I would argue that the disadvantages of social media, both mentally and physically, outweigh the benefits they bring. First, social media could have a negative impact on the physical health of people who use it directly. For example, many people choose to surf on facebook or Instagram after the workday or on weekends instead of going out, which means that their eyes do not have time to relax, so they may be at greater risk for eye diseases such as myopia in children, as well as retinal degeneration in adults. In some severe cases, blindness may even occur. Second, people use social media a lot and may tend to discourage a real conversation. When obsessed with facebook or Twitter or other sites, some young people, in particular, are reluctant to spend time with real friends and family. As a result, not only are their social skills such as soft skills and communication skills limited, but they are likely to become victims of online scams and cyber crams In conclusion, I believe that the disadvantages of this trend, especially in the aspects of social communication, outweigh the advantages they bring back.
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| 2019-11-01 | dahmuk113 | 56 | view |
| 2018-09-13 | phuong cao | 89 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01880877743 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62909438073 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7349191909 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204197631345 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754624288955 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421284560235 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204197631345 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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