You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with my printer. As an architect I use many times my printer to print my project which are drawn by applications. Everyday I need to print them to work on them by hand and I should show them to my client to change them according their idea. Due to that if my printer does not work well, it can disturb my timing plan, and I will get unpunctual person in the attitude of my customers. If I want to explain the problem of my printer, I should say that not only can not it pull the paper from its paper box and do I usually do this activity manually, but also the quality of the printing process is very low.
Recently, one months ago I changed all the cartridge and replaced them with new original, but the quality of prints paper did not change. Due to this problem I have to go to the printing store which is located far from my home and every time I really waste my time for this activity. In some days I have to print my document twice a time therefore I can not complete my duty on time. Now I wondered to know that whether you could help me to fix the problem or not. If it is possible please give me guidance how I can do this, or I have to send you my printer. I should mention that, it is very important for me to solve this problem as soon as possible.
I am waiting for your response, if you need more information, please feel free and contact me by number 09123456789 or send me email on a.m.nazaripour@gmail.com
Your Faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ess my dissatisfaction with my printer. As an architect I use many times my printe...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, I'?
Suggestion: Every day, I
...roject which are drawn by applications. Everyday I need to print them to work on them by h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pulls'?
Suggestion: pulls
..., I should say that not only can not it pull the paper from its paper box and do I u...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...ng process is very low. Recently, one months ago I changed all the cartridge and rep...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 32.9175257732 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 292.0 206.0 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26712328767 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68691174878 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4209619711 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183365655592 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763429232455 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049047086956 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121866639272 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520188296666 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.