The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The table shown provides the summary of daily collection of a small restaurant in a particular week from 7 th october to 13 october. In the overall period sales due to dinner remains high when compared with the sales of lunch.
At the starting of the week lunch sales were $2,400 and dinner sales were $3,623 a slight increase in both the sales can be seen on next day with the increase of $50 in the lunch sales and $227 increase in dinner sales. On Wednesday lunch sales again increases to $2,259 from $2,450 from Tuesday while dinner sales remains same to $3,850.
A decrease in both lunch and dinner sale is observed on Thursday, going down to $2,375 for lunch and $3,800 for dinner.On friday an increase in lunch sale is observed going to $2,500 and decrease in dinner sale is observed going to $4,350.
On weekends a drastic decrease in both lunch and dinner sales is observed , where lunch sales goes to $1,950 on saturday and all time lowest of $1,550 on sunday. A similar trend is observed in dinner sales also on saturday it went to $2,900 and $2,450 all time lowest of dinner sales on sunday
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.465 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18768613935 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2496625622 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978770322418 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588927280383 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.017913436202 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703993224468 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229225903398 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.