You recently visited a tourist attraction and you were very pleased with the help given to you by the staff.Write a letter to the head of staff at the tourist attraction.In your letter: give details of the circumstances of your visit describe the help given to you by the staff say what you want the head staff to do
Hi Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen of London. I am writing a letter to comment on your employees.Although I always use your travel agency for my travels, I never got to know the tour guides. On my recent trip to China on July 20th to July 30th, I was offered a few friends again. I registered with your institution.
We visited places like the Wall of China, the royal palaces and the Forbidden City.
I had no prior knowledge of these places. I was very interested in understanding their history and why they were built.Although the route to the Great Wall of China was very long, but because of the appealing descriptions of your staff, it seemed very short.So we thought we were living at the same time and we were one of the soldiers or workers there.
I thank you for hiring such employees, and I hope all of your employees will be treated the same on other trips.And you know that these privileges will attract more tourists and your institution will be more famous than before.I hope to experience another trip with your organization.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72277227723 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80939176513 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6590187879 44.8134815571 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254768004367 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795001286919 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606846541534 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106724316887 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417356252733 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.