In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems
suggest what could be done to improve the situation
suggest a meeting to talk about it
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Neighbours,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Neighbours,
My Name is Ahmed Ali, and I am your neighbour who lives next door. I am writing in connection with our shared hall and the issues related to it that need our prompt action.
As you may know, the walls of this area need some repairs, and the painting has already gone. In addition, the floor must be replaced as soon as possible so that we can avoid any personal injuries. Consequently, I suggest that we could hire a company to take care of the whole situation, and we can split the cost.
How about if we meet next Sunday to discuss any details and arrange everything. If this appointment seems unsuitable, please let me know to find a proper alternative. I must insist that we should meet soon as the case is deteriorating quickly and our cooperation is highly needed.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Neighbours, My Name is Ahmed Ali, and I am your neig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65789473684 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64069965494 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690789473684 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3046543294 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154130169883 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658867477435 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079849531369 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624623978042 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586779631609 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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