Jane Austin
The lecturer says that the teenager inthe potrait is not jane austin and evideence of it as her potrait is questionable. he says that the potrait teenager may be connected nwith the family of the her, but loosely and it hardly convincing that it depicts her pictuire of the teenager.
First, The speaker doubts the authencity of the painting on the basis of that the family member of her recognize her the lady at the painting. he added when she was seventeen years old not a single family member of her had seen her. so, it is hard to believe the evidence present in the passage.
Second, the passage states that the girls in the potrait resembles the sketch of Cassandra which is the real sketch of the Austin. However, the lecturer refutes this point bys aying that There may be other relatives of the Austin which seems like her at that time.
Third, The speaker articulates that the canvas uses in the painting is not match the age with austin when it was potrayed. The evidence of the stamp at the back shows that the canvas was used when jane was twenty seven years old which much older than the girl who has been painted in the4potray.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 85
- Do you agree or disagree People nowadays are more willing to help other people giving Food or clothing than in the past 76
- People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life Some read some exercise others work in their gardens What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress Use specific details and examples in your answer 60
- It is easy for family member in present than past 70
- Has technology made the world a better place to live 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...e of it as her potrait is questionable. he says that the potrait teenager may be c...
^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'her'?
Suggestion: the; her
...er may be connected nwith the family of the her, but loosely and it hardly convincing t...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...recognize her the lady at the painting. he added when she was seventeen years old ...
^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ngle family member of her had seen her. so, it is hard to believe the evidence pre...
^^
Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-seven
... that the canvas was used when jane was twenty seven years old which much older than the gir...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irl who has been painted in the4potray.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54326923077 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26592307007 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 419.366225166 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0582032413 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180360048295 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777179655621 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897640038511 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10928499584 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632729438853 0.0443174109184 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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