Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:
– Ask where to find a place to live
– Tell them what type of place you’re looking for
– Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there
Dear Anik,
May this letter finds you happy and wealthy. I hope you are doing well.
I was informed from your parents that recently you have moved to Sunamganj due to the transfer to a new branch. you would be glad to know that i have also received a transfer letter to the same city currently you are living in. My office has given me a very short notice and i am about to reach in Sunamganj by next week. that is why i am sending you this letter. Could you please suggest me some better place to live in for at least a year. Since i will be transferred again after a year. If you have any better source from where i can get the connection of finding a suitable place for me then i would love to have that. Basically i am looking for a place with 2 bedrooms with attached bathrooms and a kitchen along with a living room. I don't need any luxurious flat but a simple one would do for me. However i have huge trust on your choice. I will wait to hear from you. So far i have told you about my requirement for the new place, but most importantly i am thinking about us. It's been a while since we met and i can't wait to spend some memorable time for next one year with you. I heard about the foods and natural beauty of this city. we will use every weekends to explore the beauty and taste of this city and its foods. I would also through some party at our convenient leisure time to memorize our childhood. I hope it would be a fun time with you after the childhood. Lets hope for the best.
I shall wait to hear from you. Till then be safe and keep me in your prayers.
Thanks and regards,
Sourov Roy
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| 2019-12-27 | jsingh76 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-26 | yasirkhan111 | 73 | view |
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| 2019-09-18 | Farwah | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...nj due to the transfer to a new branch. you would be glad to know that i have also ...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce has given me a very short notice and i am about to reach in Sunamganj by next ...
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Line 9, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...out to reach in Sunamganj by next week. that is why i am sending you this letter. Co...
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Line 9, column 335, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in Sunamganj by next week. that is why i am sending you this letter. Could you p...
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Line 9, column 449, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to live in for at least a year. Since i will be transferred again after a year....
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Line 9, column 532, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f you have any better source from where i can get the connection of finding a sui...
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Line 9, column 597, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...of finding a suitable place for me then i would love to have that. Basically i am...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...en i would love to have that. Basically i am looking for a place with 2 bedrooms ...
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Line 9, column 741, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d a kitchen along with a living room. I dont need any luxurious flat but a simple on...
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Line 9, column 804, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... flat but a simple one would do for me. However i have huge trust on your choice. I wil...
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Line 9, column 960, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for the new place, but most importantly i am thinking about us. Its been a while ...
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Line 9, column 1018, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t us. Its been a while since we met and i cant wait to spend some memorable time ...
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Line 9, column 1020, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...us. Its been a while since we met and i cant wait to spend some memorable time for n...
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Line 9, column 1144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... foods and natural beauty of this city. we will use every weekends to explore the ...
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Line 9, column 1381, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... fun time with you after the childhood. Lets hope for the best. I shall wai...
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Line 27, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanks and regards, Sourov Roy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 317.0 206.0 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16719242902 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14359753665 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529968454259 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6804123711 181% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.79644501 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4347826087 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7826086957 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359827992221 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991374533627 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633304777003 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218564289392 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898170873021 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.