Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Few people are of opinion that technology have a goal to make our lives easier whereas, Other people say that Technology makes our lives complicated. I strongly believe that technology makes our lives so smooth and easier. This easy consists of 2 examples that supports my views and explains it.
Primarily, Technology is a boon for human because technological advancement makes work faster ,simpler and performed accurately. Human tendency to go towards the sollution that has more advantage is common hence man running behind the technology is not a big surprise .For instance, During 2000 ,In Postal system ,Delivery of post took days to reach from source to destination . The destination person had to wait until there was delivery of a product but nowadays, There is Online Postal options that tracks the delivery and faster mode of transfer occurs in no time.This ideology helps faster and easy way of transportation .hence technology made the task more easy.
Secondly, technology has a given a safest and secured methods such as , Online Banking,OTP generation for security purpose for every applications like emails ,bills and many other ,For instance, People in 2010 had to make transactional operations in Bank by standing in the long Queue and wait for their turn which is long process and time consuming whereas, people in 2019 have Mobile applications and other online transaction methodologies which simplifies their lives and the time saved could be used for the other productive work hence technology has made lives easier not complex .
In contrast, The technology has demerits such as human becomes lazy, obesity and many other. For example, According to Survey in Karnataka 2019, Adults have become fattier due to much use of elevators and lifts and staying immobile even during evenings time by spending most of their time in mobile . There are pros but one has to use which is useful to achieve their goals and leave the hazardous one.
In sum, The merits that technology have is prodigious. I strongly believe that technology is a gift to human to make life go smoother .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13372093023 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72680329231 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.281599164 60.3974514979 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123995059371 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470258130654 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475273264177 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701884936197 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534318765764 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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