Some People Prefer To Live In Places That Have The Same Weather Or Climate All Year Long. Others Like To Live In Areas Where The Weather Changes Several Times A Year. Which Do You Prefer? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Choice
Some people prefer to live in places that have the same whether or climate all year-long while others prefer areas where the weather changes several times a year. Personally, I prefer areas with climate changes. Living in such areas I will enjoy the feelings of swimming in the sea, skating and wear various clothes.
First, in areas where the weather changes several times a year I will be able to sunbathe in summer. Having such advantage I will not have to leave the area to have my summer holiday abroad by the sea. For example, my friend Ivan lives in the Siberia that is famous for its cold climate. To put it another way the snow is the only subject all year-long. Last summer he came to Armenia and enjoyed his holiday their swimming and sunbathing. Thus, he liked very much and decided to move to a place with different weather opportunities to taste the advantage of warm weather.
Also, changing weather patterns give you an advantage of seeing a snow at least once. It gives a chance of skating, skiing and making a snowman. For example, my friend Johnny lives in Africa, so it is always hot there, and moreover I found out that he had never seen the snow or felt the coldness on his face. Therefore last winter I invited him to Armenia. Amused by his appearance without warm clothes I offered my ones. Thus he was very happy to see the snow and grateful to me, that made him change his living place and soon he left his country to live in areas with changing weather.
Moreover, different weathers allow me to wear different clothes as I like clothes and have a great deal of them. For example, one year I spent in Brazil. It is very hot there and I did not have an opportunity of wearing warm clothes. Actually I missed them very much. By returning home I was eager to try on new warm clothes and was very happy relieved. Therefore, climate changes give me great variety of winter and summer clothes.
When all is said and done, I can boldly say that I prefer to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Instead of leaving the area to taste the rays of the sun on my face, the coldness of snow or new clothes, one should live in the area with changing climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... snow or felt the coldness on his face. Therefore last winter I invited him to Armenia. A...
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Line 9, column 424, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...without warm clothes I offered my ones. Thus he was very happy to see the snow and g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47160493827 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28475261195 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479012345679 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5270240882 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7391304348 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6086956522 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387771746707 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110729491419 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151655380234 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259420451737 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159989347552 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.