The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The given chart compare the figures of the survey carried out of 100 000 random Uk residents about the purpose of their travels and the areas which they choose for their trips for 4 years since 1994.
In general, the majority UK citizens tend to travel aboard in their holidays and Western Europe is the region attracted vast variety of visitors during 4 years of the survey.
According to the table, there are a growing tendency for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the begin of the research, it only collected over 22,000 surveys. In a next year, the amount of surveys marginally decline approximately 500 units. Then, the figures have a positive sign in 1996, it increases to almost 25,000 and steadily increase during the period 1996-98.
It can be seen that the second chart shows a significant difference of 3 regions. The total of people who went to North America and Other Areas just only takes a quarter of UK residents travelled to the West of Europe. In 1994, the first year of this survey, while Western Europe attracted about 220,000 UK citizens, the number of UK visitors go to 2 other region are under 2500 people. Specifically, it peaks at approximately 250,000 UK visitors in 1998.
To sum up, the UK residents ten to go to Western Europe and their destination from 1994 to 1998 is travelling or having business trips.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tendencies'?
Suggestion: tendencies
...rding to the table, there are a growing tendency for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ncy for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the begin of the research, it only collected over...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
...the number of UK visitors go to 2 other region are under 2500 people. Specifically, it...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75213675214 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54718421353 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2698337677 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261230220645 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877225908006 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669259728738 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139731950956 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689260800047 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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