At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays in some parts of the world, the young adults make up the greater part of the population as compared to their older counterparts. This has a more positive than a negative effect to the countries experiencing this trend.
To begin with, there are more benefits to the countries that have a significant number of young people making up their population. Firstly, the youth is energetic and it involves those that are already in the working class and they make a good contribution to the economy of that particular country. The nature of jobs that the young people partake in are those that are needed for this challenging world of technology for example, information technology jobs and hence contributes towards the economy of a country. Secondly, the young persons are still at their reproductive ages and as the aged get eliminated through natural selection the youth shall continue to have more children to replace them.
On the other hand, there are drawbacks associated with such a trend where there are fewer older adults than the young ones. If a population has only young people, it ends up not being able to meet their demands such as providing them with education and employment and failure to do this can then lead to the youth being involved in crimes. The other negative effect of having more of older adults is that they bring along an expense to the governments because as people grow older they get to suffer from disease that are age-related. When this happens the health budget of that country increases to cater for the elderly and their associated illnesses.
In conclusion, although there could be some drawbacks of having more young people in a population, there are more positive effects associated with this as young people are still energetic and take up jobs that are in line with the advances in technology these days and they also ensure continuity of reproduction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93167701863 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63540745956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487577639752 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5917104223 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.363636364 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201163960792 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816357508517 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468151633451 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132442326983 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329577294771 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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