Uniforms Vs non-Uniforms
There is a huge debate about wearing a uniform in school. Some believe that students should wear what they think is better for them while others think that schools should have their uniforms and all students should wear it. This essay will discuss why it is in fact that wearing a uniform is a good thing.
Contrary to the belief that students should wear what fits better to their personality or the style they would like, evidence shows that students would feel pride wearing the uniform of their school because the dress code represent the sense of their belonging to that institution or school community. it is a form of identity for each student that is part of that school. For example, statistics have revealed that 90 percent of students who wear uniform, feel proud of themselves as being part of their schools. Compares to the ten percent of counterparts who felt nothing about their school. So, wearing a uniform perhaps make students feel proud of being part of their school.
In addition, wearing uniform is less expensive than buying the whole wardrobe of outfits. many parents can afford the prices that are setted for uniforms. However, wearing the cheap alternative can result in punishment if the black shirt that you are wearing is not exactly the right black shirt.
For instance, many schools are limited to only to one supplier. if schools end this form of practice by using not only one supplier, that would enable parents to shop around and find a cost-effective uniforms for their children. Furthermore, the potential bullies would have less target for their insults; it is hard to make fun of what someone is wearing when we all are dressed exactly the same.
In conclusion, in my view, uniforms are welcome because they symbolize pride, also they are less expensive and help students to not get bullied by their friends because of what they are wearing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91925465839 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39192538519 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487577639752 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9760981695 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159590366949 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781711165527 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072187751846 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105048707484 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441267557944 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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