Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The old wise men of ancient history were known because of their ability to be highlighted on different fields. today, the current state of scientifical advances diminished this way of accumulating knowledge due to how far we have gotten on many specific topics. Consequently, I believe that having a deep knowledge of a specific academic subject is better than a shallow knowledge on a variety of topics. I support my place with the following three reasons.
First, by dominating a single topic one can be then referred as an expert in that area. The more specialized you are, the better your prospects are since today most enterprises look forward specific topics. Being focused on one area o domain enables a person to be competitive. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. when I started my Physics major, I was greatly amazed by how everything worked and so wanted to learn a bit from every field. As I matured in my career, I realized that while I had a lot of topics to talk about, I wasn't competitive at all since I couldn't consider myself an expert. I then decided to focus on one specific area of study and this helped me become an expert. The ability earned allowed me to get a great job in a highly competitive market.
Secondly, a superficial knowledge can be misleading most of the times. when knowing too little about any topic, most of the details are often left out of the core concepts. For instance, I have a friend from college that proposed to himself he would learn the most he can of every geophysics area. while he managed to learn a handful of topics ranging from seismic sciences to astrophysics, he didn't understand most of the core concepts that were base on deeper definitions. having a widespread knowing didn't help him get on the most specialized positions, making him realize of the mistake he made.
Another important reason for specializing is that you can rely on some expert to solve a problem that you might be struggling with relatively ease. For example, if it weren't for the plumbers we might have to fix our own sewage of water connections without warranty of success. By having highly specialized trained professionals on the market, we can solve problems without further complications. this, in turn, enables the active movement of well trained professionals in the market.
In conclusion, a profound wisdom of a specific topic is preferable over little knowledge about a variety of topics. this is because as specialist we can be referred as experts which in turn enables us to better life prospects, and without any kind misinformation we can succeed in our domain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85619469027 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86011466434 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537610619469 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6654548768 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4347826087 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206371194959 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572104409203 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720068729196 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113037284936 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804241305412 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.