Most adults believe that modern children (5-10 years old) behave worse than those in the past. What action parents should take do you think will have the most positive effect on children to help them behave better like respecting and treating others kindly?
1) limit the types of the TV programs and movies they watch
2) spend more time talking with children
3) supervise and monitor children while they are playing with their friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, it is true that the modern children behave worse than those in the past. Last week, my 5-year-old cousin even called his father 'the pig' just because his snakes were eaten by his father. It is really disappointed. So, someone holds the view that we should educate them patiently through praise and encouragement. However, from my perspective, I do believe punishment is much more important.
To begin with, spending more time talking with children is unpractical. Admittedly, talking can build the awareness of the respecting and kindness in children's mind. Nevertheless, parents usually do not have so much time. Today, young people usually meet with high pressure in the work, and they usually need to work into the midnight in order to promote or gain more salaries. At the weekends, though there may be no work, but after one week's work, what they really want is resting and resting. So, it is difficult and unpractical for them to have enough time on their children.
Besides, supervising and monitoring children while they are playing with their friend may not be useful. We must admit that when the parents monitor, the children will behave well. But what they behave when we leave? Things may be different, and they may not show respect or kind treatment at all. Children will eventually grow up and parents cannot company them all the time. Thus, it may be not a good idea to just watch and watch. What is more, making friends is very important for them and when we monitor them, they may feel disturbed or embarrassed, and even be laughed at for being monitored.
Lastly, punishment can easily solve the problem and one way is limiting the types of TV programs and movies they watch. Children usually like watching TV and movies and they love spending time on them. So something unhealthy for them including violence, bad habit, disrespectful speaking style, etc can easily cause bad effect on them. If the parents cut the source, they will have no chance to learn these bad things. What is more, the children may also feel that this is a punishment and in order to watch next time, they will try hard to behave well so that they will gradually develop the good habit.
Helping the children behave well cannot be successful in a few days, it needs parents' efforts for a long time, but for our next generation, we can never give up.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one week', 'a week', or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: one week; a week; weeks
... though there may be no work, but after one weeks work, what they really want is resting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, really, so, thus, well, while, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8112745098 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46817498073 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7058629872 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7916666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224669683137 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746941446397 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697914188546 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128571685994 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277692162467 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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