Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However, other argue that other things like television of friends have the most significant influence.
Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
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family: Arial, sans-serif;"> parents brings significant child’s development from small to large. Firstly, parents are more reliable because they have strong connect and direct communication with their children. child’s family provide the feeling and the children are more in contact with the family when they speak together in the meal and see how to behave with each other. Finally, they know the temperament of their kids and they can teach their child about moral values and help their children towards a whole person. In addition, they are the role model that is why have influence the same about brainstorm and activity. For example: the mother or father have a habit such as defame others, the child will follow family: -webkit-standard, serif;">
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- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However, other argue that other things like television of friends have the most significant influence.Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18028169014 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14002674677 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.2859696425 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.125 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153589852758 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065944783536 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100218783287 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715695088599 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10321654759 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.56 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.