What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television?
Nowadays, television program is more and more attracted to everyone, especially children. Young adults often spend much time on watching television and mobile phone. However, there are both pros and cons for children of viewing program. In my essay, I will discuss some reasons what are the positives and what are the drawbacks?
In common, there are much program with educational content that children can learn from them. Kids can have more and more knowledge about history and culture of their country or the world. In addition, the comedy program on television also help children to reduce stress and feel pleasure after studying in school. This can lead to refresh their spirit and brain and they will receive the better result in studying.
On the other hand, Poison program on television can impact to young adults. They can follow-up this program and make the wrong attitude and action. This can lead to crime in youth age. Moreover, spending much time on watching television will make kids not concentrate into their study and get the bad result in studying. Furthermore, contacting with their family and friends will also be reduced because for them, program on television is more interesting than their family.
In conclusion, watching television will impact both positives and negatives to children. Besides getting useful knowledge for studying and lifestyle, children will opposite with harmful impact. In my opinion, if parents can control and instruct the interesting and good program, watching television is obviously necessary activity to their kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'programs'?
Suggestion: programs
... drawbacks? In common, there are much program with educational content that children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54603692039 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2466423756 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251425527182 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904892294852 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643954701377 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185104303295 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908162014137 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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