Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
People are nowadays are falling behind in the gym and a healthy diet to keep up their body by the fat, but in order to do that it's a difficult one to achieve and to follow-up for the rest of their life. Firstly, this essay will explain what are the complication and secondly, remedial action to continue their selection of food.
On the one hand, people are thinking about maintaining the body by working out in the gym or exercise. Certain people will meet it by doing their healthy diet and sweating in the gym, but most of the people will think all night to maintain their choice of food and the next morning itself they will completely forget everything and their mundane routine will start as it is by eating unhealthy food or oily food. For instance, corporate people have not maintained healthy food because of the work pressure or they are not getting time.
On the other hand, to make a selection of food is done by the people who are thick because they want to become thin, so they are well under control in a healthy diet at least to cut their weight. Apart from those other people will not likely to maintain their diet until they became overweight. Those who are going gym have to main maintain diet by taking protein food only and not fatty food. For example, sports persons are maintaining a diet to keep up their fitness and celebrity people also started concerning their selection of food.
To sum up, people are throwing money for healthy concern and their diet by taking protein and vitamin food only. But some are not control by not eating outside food unless you cannot control your mind till then its a waste of money on spending. They have to make scheduled on their diet and they have to follow up accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Line 13, column 212, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... you cannot control your mind till then its a waste of money on spending. They have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57324840764 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24347630486 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477707006369 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3654807055 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1907430866 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934094680713 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362269110218 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133759507799 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225479956086 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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