DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? CHILDHOOD IS THE HAPPIEST TIME IN A PERSON’S LIFE.
Childhood is a very important stage in a person's life, and it has huge consequences in the latter part of our life. But, I do not think it is the happiest period of our life. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the child is very influenced by the environment that he or she was born in. So if the circumstances of that environment are bad, the kid would suffer from being in that bad conditions. Moreover, the child is surrounded by people that he or she did not have the choice to be with, and mostly he did not has the ability to live with other because he did not own the means to do so. Furthermore, if the father was a hard person and deal with his children badly, this would result in negative memory about the home, My friend's experience is a compelling example of this. He was born in a poor family, and his father was addicted to drugs, so the whole childhood of my friend was struggling with his father. In fact, he took extra years to complete his high school, because his father forced him to work to get money, and this money was used by his father to buy drugs more and more.
Secondly, our personalities in childhood is not fully developed. On the other hand, when we become adults we get the required experiences to develop our knowledge and perception of things. Additionally, we become responsible for the choices we make, and then we feel freer to take the path that we think is better for our interest, even if this path is not the best one. For instance, when I applied to university, I did not follow my parent's wishes, but my dreams. And when I got accepted in the major that I wanted. Although I faced many difficulties I did not complain, because this the choice that I made and I should be responsible for that. As a result, I found a way to come over these difficulties.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that childhood is not the happiest time of a person's life. This is because we do not choose the conditions that we born in, and because of the lack of freedom and responsibility
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...hildhood is a very important stage in a persons life, and it has huge consequences in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very important stage in a persons life, and it has huge consequences in the latt...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...hoice to be with, and mostly he did not has the ability to live with other because ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...childhood is not the happiest time of a persons life. This is because we do not choose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36503856041 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63185596673 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493573264781 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6094160464 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159086184952 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631614339825 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882565978983 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133652341529 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841684033185 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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