Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There was a time when nobody could think of purchasing things by just a click on their computers but thanks to the internet revolution, it has made this a reality. People now can shop anything online like groceries, books, apparel, air tickets, furniture and it is being favored a lot these days. It is labor-saving and people can choose from a pool of brands, also consumers review aids a lot in selecting the right items, so advantage can far outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, online shopping has become a lot convenient now, people do not want to stroll through the crowded stores for purchases, also they have a reservoir of brands available online from which they can explore and opt the best ones. Furthermore, brand comparison windows are also available on the websites along with consumer reviews forums, where they can find out what exactly they need in their product and shortlist it after analyzing the reviews. Therefore, online purchasing is helping many individuals by making their life comfortable and stress-free.
On the flip side, shopping online has some disadvantages as well, such as fear of cheating. People have anxieties, what if they will be looted? or what if someone saves their card details? In addition to this, most of the middle age group feel of no personal touch while buying the items online as compared to what they have in offline purchasing. For example, check out the material by holding it or going to the agents to book air tickets and paying them hefty commissions. Hence, some people prefer the old school approach for themselves.
To conclude, there are concerns of people of shopping online and they are valid as well but these are negligible before online purchasing where everything can be ordered, from food to clothes by simply adding it into your cart and order right away to your doorstep.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...anxieties, what if they will be looted? or what if someone saves their card detail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96805111821 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6196173857 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0073090398 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138761992928 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462223443493 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354627248627 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085361009848 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256535121318 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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