Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
There would be a tendency that numerous criminals woul commit more crimes again although crime prevention programs, community revitalization strategies and rehabilitation programs are offered in order to intervene effectively in the cycle of recidivism. This essay will discuss the biggest reason causing this phenomenon and then an efficient solution can be sumitted as the most viable.
The major cause of repeat offender is unemployment after being put behind bars. Obviously, there is an increasing demand for potential candidates in terms of their both qualified education and good morals and ethics as a requirement of most jobs in modern society. Additionally, the difficulties that former prisoners face are compounded by the shadow of their criminal past due to social stigma, discrimination and prejudice that they can follow the beaten track.For example, according to a report of Vietnam express, it was conducted over 10000 citizens in 2017, almost 90 percent of them had not advocated the idea of employing a person who was an offender as they want to avoid serious threats or potential dangers in their home or at their workplace. Henceforth, this would be a significant impediment for ex-convicts to be in search for a stable job and start rebuilding his/her life after previous incarceration since employers are reluctant to hire a person with a criminal record.
A possible solution for this problem would be a law to protect the ex-criminals.Specifically, it is necessary that legislative protections for for former offenders should be warranted with greater employment opportunities and healthy working environment without discrimination in which fellow workers can be encouraged to work in harmony and share each other’s experience, knowledge and common interests. Besides, the employers can create a good-faith working environment in the hope that these golden opportunities can reform more good-hearted, open-minded, well-informed citizens at the workplace and community instead of back in prison.
In conclusion, unemployment seem to be on of the strongest predictors of recidivism. Henceforth, to tackle this phenomenon, it is the responsibility of government to create a healthy working environment without discrimination and prejudice for the possibility of social reintegration and individual reformation of each ex-offender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72033898305 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50635529213 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590395480226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.915211243 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.5 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206177265911 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836884477751 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489946742593 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130903934222 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046789941441 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.03 50.2224549098 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.