People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position y

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 815, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple's attitudes are more determined by the moment than by what society belie...
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Line 7, column 862, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e moment than by what society believes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3394.0 2235.4752809 152% => OK
No of words: 675.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02814814815 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09713273454 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342725776 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454814814815 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1085.4 704.065955056 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1539307776 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.555555556 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 23.4991977007 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25200715793 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877750251818 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564422244134 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135351009154 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380375642754 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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