tpo 36 franchise rather than opening a new business
The material discusse the concept of franchise. While the reading states that it is better to buy a franchise rather than opening a new independent business, the listening challenges this and mentions that when the study looks closer, it puts this idea in a question.
Fitrst, the author posits that franchise could solve the problem of finding a reliable suppliers. On the other hand, the profesor opposes this and says that franchise companies use specific goods and sevices, which are over prices, and the owner of the business has to use from these suppliers. The lecturer adds that even though there are equilvalent and cheaper suppliers available in the markert, the owner of the business does not allow to buy from them.
Second, the writer points out that fanchise could owners' save money that could be allocated for advertisments. On the contrary, the professor refutes this and states that the franchise owners agree to pay six percent of their sales to the franchise comapany. The lecturer adds that some of this money could return back to owners through advertising. The speaker explains that the franchise companies do not advertise to a specific business, but they advertise for their brands and products, which are sold by many buisnesses at many places. The lecturer adds that the direct advertising for a business could be more beneficial and consume half of this money.
Third, the reading contends that the failure rate of a franchise is much lower than a new independent business. Conversely, the lecturer contradicts this and points out that openning a franchise is more secure than a new business, but it is not the most reliable option. The professor explains that there is a third option, the reading did not mention. The speaker adds that buying an already existing business could have twice chance of sucsess at the first four years as franchise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'supplier'?
Suggestion: supplier
...solve the problem of finding a reliable suppliers. On the other hand, the profesor oppose...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...he owner of the business does not allow to buy from them. Second, the writer points ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...urer adds that some of this money could return back to owners through advertising. The spea...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sold by many buisnesses at many places. The lecturer adds that the direct advertisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, look, second, so, third, while, as to, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02243589744 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59683435209 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9463436667 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226548588052 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074452568119 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762048020123 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149944640038 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661716066883 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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