You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalization that “the magic thing about home is that though it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back”. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to the tenants but only generates monthly income for the landlord, purchasing a house helps to bring a sense of security and pride. In my opinion, the advantages of purchasing a house far outweigh the disadvantages of renting accommodation.
Owning a home undoubtedly offers a long-term benefit of security, equity and potential growth of personal wealth that are enjoyed by the occupant. The value of the home will appreciate and if one decides to sell, they can earn the profit of the sale. Moreover, being a Homeowner allows creative control of their property. As they can alter the décor changes, landscaping, and renovations, according to their needs and style. They can also generate additional monthly income by renting their own property. To illustrate, purchasing a place of residence clearly neither allow the interference from anyone nor there is any sudden notice of evacuation.
In contrast, renting a property does not offer any wealth creation or return on investment as the property does not belong to the tenant instead, it creates a burden on the occupant to pay a monthly rent to the landlord. Additionally, the lessee is not allowed to renovate the property according to his desires and is even requires to follow the rules and regulations that are mentioned in the rent agreement. To elucidate, many flat owners do not allow the entry of pets into their property, so those who have pets cannot rent the place.
In conclusion, I vehemently agree that purchasing accommodation is the most feasible option for people. As it offers freedom, safety and monetary compensation to the homeowners than renting a place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...ing to his desires and is even requires to follow the rules and regulations that are ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08917197452 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90243951498 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5169025433 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184923300109 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578494234822 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469181208922 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103317489034 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522809654733 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.