Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors.
What is the cause of this problem?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience
Many people these days may not know the people living in their locality, not even the person living next door. While social media and Internet, and the cultural difference are the two main reason for this problem, there are solutions.
In my opinion, firstly, with the advancement of technology, and the advent of internet and social media has provided the ability to extend our relationships, but, it has made us far from the people living next to us. For instance, we contact people across the ocean at the click of a mouse, and communicate kind talks at two in the morning through social media. It has become common that people who live is the same locality, rarely know each other. People tend to forget that these neighbors are those individuals who come handy when you are in any emergency situation not the social media followers.
Secondly, all our communities have becoming more diverse. Most people fear what they do not understand, so when a neighbor from a different culture or religion moves in, an instant proneness to maintain distance goes up. The misfortune of this this scenario is, we all are sheltering ourselves from new relationships and becoming more self-centred.
Fortunately, there are solutions to this problem. Getting to know is the first step to create a healthy relationship with the neighboring people. Another way would be by arranging social gathering every once in a while. From my personal experience, if a new person moved in to your society, he should be welcomed properly. Initially by meeting him personally and greeting him. Then invite him to the society’s social gathering and introducing other members of the society. This is a chance to know the new members personally and understand his culture. This is for sure will create a great foundation for neighborhood unity.
To conclude, although these days fewer people know their neighbor, and the reason for this problem is social media and internet but with small effort, it is possible to create a supporting and understanding neighborhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14201183432 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8225425794 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3279839442 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244680142514 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751623012734 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603692304393 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143523325424 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463918210451 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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