Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words
there are mixed beliefs about organising unpaid community service between high school programmes. These people claim that unpaid community service should include working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. this essay will argue why unpaid community service should compulsory in those sectors.
Many people believe that the best way to contribute to unpaid community service is to include them to different high school programmes. In order to support our schools, it would be a great way to save some money if somebody would teach sports to younger children. For instance, a decade ago our football coach broke his leg and the school did not have any skilled staff to replace him. Therefore our communal house allocated a person with needed skills. The fact is not only he helped to win the championships he is still working in our school. that also illustrates how efficient this system is.
On the other hand, the strategy did not work in another school. The teacher went to the holiday for three months and a skilled man was available. But he background was a little bit doggy. After 3 weeks of working staff notest things missing. And to nobodies surprise newcomer was a thief.
this essay argued why there are mixed beliefs in unpaid community service between high school programmes. In my opinion, unpaid community service between high school programmes should be compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57794341326 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8357060797 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385448731792 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113031990382 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121879091415 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233879840979 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126545811186 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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