Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
Few adults are more fascinated by the idea of migrating to new places especially urban areas, leaving behind a place where they belong to.
A recent study shows that there is an increase in the number of immigrants to town. Population in big cities and towns is increasing exponentially
while there is a decline in the population of rural areas. This easy will try to cover all the reasons behind this fanatical movement of individuals.
As we all know, cities are far more developed than the countryside’s and this is the key reason behind these migrations. The advantages of
living in the cities are numerous; the Better education system, a wide variety of alternatives, better basic amenities, and advance medical facilities are among few.
Although cities provide very advance life as compared to the countryside but there is a lack of peace in fast-paced city life. Once you start living in a city you will
have to say goodbye to authenticity and a peaceful life. Despite all these facts, these adults move to different locations altogether leaving older people
in their family behind. In search of a better career, to fulfill their dreams and aspirations they try to fit in modern cities. Let these people decide if this step is worthy enough.
In the end, I would like the government to take initiatives so that the countryside could become a better destination for these people to move back
and live life happily with their families and loved ones. Let’s make the countryside a better place to live so that nobody leaves their hometown to pursue dreams and aspirations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
... towns is increasing exponentially while there is a decline in the population of...
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... towns is increasing exponentially while there is a decline in the population of...
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...fanatical movement of individuals. As we all know, cities are far more deve...
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...hese migrations. The advantages of living in the cities are numerous; the Better ...
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... lack of peace in fast-paced city life. Once you start living in a city you will ...
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...ou start living in a city you will have to say goodbye to authenticity and a pe...
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...ns altogether leaving older people in their family behind. In search of a bet...
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...ide if this step is worthy enough. In the end, I would like the government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15671641791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79782081128 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.559407801 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199883603397 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686645540868 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044511132087 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755575794945 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307435778844 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.