Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often said that international tourism reveal the differences between the nationalities that are visiting certain country. Among many Industries, international tourism is the dominating one in today’s world. However, there are many opponents to that industry. In my opinion, international tourism is great way for communicating and sharing your experiences. In this essay, I will discuss the Advantages of international tourism.
scientific studies show that people travelling frequently have the opportunity to gain friends ten times more than other persons. A clear evidence for that study, persons travelling to other countries are more likely to meet new people from different nationalities. For example, hostels is a place where new friendships can form and grow up. Multinational tourists share the same room, kitchen and even the dinning area where they can meet together and share their similarities as well as their differences.
It appears that the new generations tend to share their experiences online. International tourists are not away from that. As a result, Many Facebook groups about international tourism stems from that idea. They gathered to share their experiences in the different countries they have visited. For example, the famous group which is called travel secrets club. This group is aimed to documenting the travel experiences for other international tourists to benefit from it. For that reason, international tourism has many benefits that are particularly affecting the new generations.
In conclusion, The advantages of international tourism outweighs the drawbacks. similarities between nationalities are more than differences and differences are the main reason for socializing and communicating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82945736434 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28882535462 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1908205078 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252157631122 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923094539079 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723038661366 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173331093008 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853647779292 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.94 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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