You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Neighbours,
........
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Neighbours,
I am writing this letter to complain about the inproper use of the parking space.
There are two problems in the parking which are greatly affecting me. Firstly, you are not parking your cars properly as the cars occupy the space determined for my car. Another problem is that I find garbage in my parking space which really annoys me.
I would appreciate it if you could stop your cars within the limited space. A partition could be used if necessary to guide you on your limits. Another suggestion is to use marks on the floor so that it would be easy for you to determine where is your space. Regarding the second problem, it would be more convenient to throw the garbage in the garbage room beside the left.
could we meet on Thursday morning to discuss any further recommendation from your side. Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Nourhan Magdi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
... the garbage room beside the left. could we meet on Thursday morning to discuss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8954248366 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48173299848 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6380367626 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122047173141 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478012113896 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359073333945 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744028876673 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448858977546 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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