Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Peter,
I trust you're having good day. we had a plan to watch movie tomorrow but unfortunately, it won't be possible.
This morning, I got news from my uncle, living in Dubai, that my grandmother is very ill and hospitalized. you know, I've been her loveable grandson since my born. Hence, I'm visiting her tomorrow in early morning flight.
Please consider my sincere apology that I won't be able to join you, but I've my close friend Marcus and you know him very well. he is very interested in sci-fi movie which we had planned.
I had word with him today morning only and he is interested to accompany you. he is very nice guy with lots of movie information. I'm sure you will enjoy his company.
Once again I'm sorry that I altered your plan but you know priorities to family. have a great trip ahead.
Best wishes
Chintan Rathod
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Peter, I trust youre having good day. we had a plan to watch...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...er, I trust youre having good day. we had a plan to watch movie tomorrow but ...
^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...andmother is very ill and hospitalized. you know, Ive been her loveable grandson si...
^^^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...is very ill and hospitalized. you know, Ive been her loveable grandson since my bor...
^^^
Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...loveable grandson since my born. Hence, Im visiting her tomorrow in early morning ...
^^
Line 13, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...gy that I wont be able to join you, but Ive my close friend Marcus and you know him...
^^^
Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...iend Marcus and you know him very well. he is very interested in sci-fi movie whic...
^^
Line 17, column 21, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
... had planned. I had word with him today morning only and he is interested to accompany ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... and he is interested to accompany you. he is very nice guy with lots of movie inf...
^^
Line 17, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ice guy with lots of movie information. Im sure you will enjoy his company. ...
^^
Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ill enjoy his company. Once again Im sorry that I altered your plan but you ...
^^
Line 21, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...plan but you know priorities to family. have a great trip ahead. Best wishes ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69078947368 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44322654612 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4536371569 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.8461538462 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215327537366 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678630069979 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658744389173 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121091208696 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472912177078 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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