Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
Explain why you didn’t write earlier
Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Marry,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am still relishing the pleasant time we had together last month at your place. Although, its such a short time, since we saw each other it feels much longer.
I can't thankyou enough for such a memorable holiday and a warm hospitality. Moreover, thankyou for the lovely photos, I have just recieved. it brought it all back to me so vividly. Muscat is a scenic palce, I have realy enjoyed the Omani food and their culture. In addition, the city has a remarkable landscape.
I am extremely sorry, that it has taken me so long to write you back. As you know I am work on a project since I reached back from vaccations. this project has made me experience a lot. since it was a tough project. However, I am finally able to finish it, just working on documentation.
What are your plans? we have a family function two months later. My younger brother is getting engaged with the love of his life. I would like you to come and join us to such an auspicious occasion and load him with your blessing.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
warm Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marry, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ach other it feels much longer. I cant thankyou enough for such a memorable ho...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...he lovely photos, I have just recieved. it brought it all back to me so vividly. M...
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Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t since I reached back from vaccations. this project has made me experience a lot. s...
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Line 11, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...s project has made me experience a lot. since it was a tough project. However, I am f...
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Line 11, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s project has made me experience a lot. since it was a tough project. However, I am f...
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Line 15, column 22, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...cumentation. What are your plans? we have a family function two months later...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...Looking forward to hearing from you. warm Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53658536585 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48907667157 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678048780488 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2918440661 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.9473684211 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7894736842 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259630099183 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655519432853 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586552135028 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130379700122 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371435943223 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.