You had a dinner with your friends' family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about dinner.
What did you like at the dinner?
How was his/her family ?
Invite your friend and his family to your place?
Dear Johan Clark
I hope you are doing well. Firstly, I am very thankful to you for giving me such an incredible dinner. It was a great time with you and your family not only because of scrumptious food but also hospitable attitude. You know! the entire dinner items were my favourites one and the snacks and sauce had a lip-smacking taste that I still remember. Especially, I liked the hand made recipes of your grandmother that I wouldn't forget for whole life.
Your family members are very generous. They welcomed me very enthusiastically and treated me like as their own children. Your mother and father are very benevolent and your little brother's sense of humour was speechless. Your grandmother is such a great lady with warm-hearted nature. I felt very pleased after visiting your home.
Do you remember my birthday? Yes ! it will be on next month, so I organised a party at my home. I want to invite you and your family members for this celebration. I hope you will definitely join us on this occasion.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Best regards
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e to hear from you soon! Best regards Emily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71562219264 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7331730765 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347000759905 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114363668693 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782870843715 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185631434685 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846897001108 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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