You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer.
In your letter:
• say how you feel about his/her performance
• give details of your music-related activities
• explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Enrique Iglesias,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the brilliant performance that you put up in Delhi on 25th September.
I am a huge fan of your music and I never miss any of your concerts. The concert was simply breath taking and electrifying and I am sure that everyone present there must have enjoyed your performance.
I am an aspiring musician and have been trained in singing for 6 years. I have a degree in singing course from Delhi University and I am also trained in playing guitar. Furthermore, I am an active group member of the band ‘music’ as a playback singer. We have participated in many singing competitions and have won many awards. I have also received an award for the best playback singer.
I am sure that you have a busy schedule but if you can spare some of your time to provide me mentorship on how to be an excel in music. I positively believe that your guidance and tips will help me to enhance my singing and music-related skills moreover, help me in developing a successful music career
Thank you so much for your contribution to this world and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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| 2019-10-30 | prabhpreet kaur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e to provide me mentorship on how to be an excel in music. I positively believe that you...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...torship on how to be an excel in music. I positively believe that your guidance a...
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Line 9, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in developing a successful music career Thank you so much for your contribution ...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours Faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67619047619 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9293456197 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7901590181 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243594569288 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868673717732 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771924694141 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126441259973 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084362335171 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.