Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.
How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature?
Ever since the technology came in lime ligh,t a huge change in children's life style can be observed, such as, they prefer more to indoor activities rather than outdoors. To my mind, teaching them the value of exposure to the nature is need of the hour, owning to several reasons, elucidated in the upcoming segments.
First and foremost important fact of spending time outdoors is that one becomes physically strong and mentally agile. To be more precise, when off spring indulge in outdoor activities like games, they grow up better and faster at physical and cognitive level. Not only this but also it teaches them the sense of brotherhood competition and cooperation which can not be learnt by sitting isolated at home. A game 'hide and seek' ,for instance, inculcates the skills of teamwork, how to complete, how to defeat gracefully and many more among them.
Likewise, outdoor activities keep the them refreshed, relaxed, rejuvenated and revitalized. In this case, they are more susceptible to get informed about their surroundings which further makes them acceptable in the society. As such, their outdoor contribution proves more beneficial than that of indoors. What is more, such practice widens their perspective and broadens their horizon. To illustrate, it develops their span of knowledge, thus, involving in such kind of activities is pretty prominent for young ones.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that ongoing trend of involving more in outdoor has obviously plethora of limitations among tender minds at physical and mental level. Therefore, introducing them with outdoor activities is a crucial step to ameliorate the predicament.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31178707224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8516806082 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3112253069 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116699767846 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393596540946 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366499812053 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656747514483 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434337752224 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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