Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Explain the reason for the noise
• Apologise
• Describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear ………………………,
Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint concerning the loud noise from my flat because of which you had to suffer.
Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen. As some children were playing cricket outside my house, accidently, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window and broke its glass. Moreover, since, I do not have any prior experience of how to repair a window, the hammering must have created a problem for you and your family.
I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused because of the lack of my knowledge. I was not aware that the noise will be so loud that it will reach to your flat.
As far as the work of the kitchen window is concerned it is still pending, I have decided to hire a professional. I will instruct him to keep the noise as low as possible. The work will be completed in a day or two.
Once again, I apologise for the problems faced by you. Please accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regard for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49019607843 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59900093188 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4098831372 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242699198334 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885757232874 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850129365975 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114369267991 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967801614773 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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