The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.2.11
You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the six underground railways with the information of date opened, route length and the number of visited commuters.
Overall, it is apparently seen that the oldest underground was from London whereas consisting the longest way. Tokyo having the highest number of travelers while, the least been to Kyato which, having shortest route.
London is the longest way compared to the other underground systems, accounted 394 km length. It has opened in 1863 and reached 775 passengers per year. Paris and Tokyo were opened in 1900 and 1927 respectively, where visited 1191 and 1927 commuters annually. Noticeably, there routes lengths are not exceeded than 200km.
Kyato, the shortest with 11km length, shown 45 passengers throughout the year. Annually, 144 travelers been to Washington DC that having 126km. Los Angeles is the latest opened (In 2001) underground system which is 28km long and with 50 passengers had come there for a year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the shortest'.
Suggestion: having the shortest
...s while, the least been to Kyato which, having shortest route. London is the longest way c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32679738562 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65106611868 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5857104475 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092846039255 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333520355556 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509694317901 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689957059225 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634256669808 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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