In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction, causing high levels of water and air pollution. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
The issue with deterioration of air and water quality caused by factories and construction companies in a large number of delevoping nations has raised a global awareness on the importance of environment protection. there are solutions which should be implemented to deal with this problem.
Firstly, the reason for the declining standard of natural ressource, originate from both the production process of goods from raw material in plants and the building fields like community, road, bridge, is due to the inappropriate or illeagle discharge of waste from these sites, which may contain harmful or even toxic substances. Secondly, as few laws and administrative supervision are introduced to clamp down on these kind of activities against the environmental protection criterions, wastes are being simply dumped and disposed.
there are two effective solutions to this problem. On way to tackle this case is to ensure that restrictions and laws are made by the relevant authorities with the objective of banning behaviours with no respect to the earth. A another method of dealing with pollution is to upgrade the industral structure and the housing-raising technics for a green growth. this would hopefully improve the efficiency and profitability of traditional business for the sake of reducing the discharge of chemical elements during the working procedure.
In conclusion, having regulations, management and also a healthy industry system wih Hi-tech are effective in handling this issue. If government utilised these solutions, atmosphere and water quality in these states could soon be improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58943089431 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12960877016 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4372291492 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233791720657 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808320999057 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514581914312 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130876402097 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612508649391 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.