There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Global warming has been a controversial problem over the world recently. It is said that human activities are the mainly cause for this issue. Undoubtedly, the claim is undeniable although some precise reasons still need to be addressed in order to search effective solutions for reconstructing our planet.
Speaking of reasons, deforestation and urbanisation play a vital role making the way for higher temperatures around the Earth. As can be seen on the current news, there are an increasing number of plants being cut down for housing and industry everyday. As the result, the amount of carbon oxide in the atmostphere keep reducing and clear the way for rocketing greenhouse gases. Moreover, skycrapers and other factories are built as an essential needs when every country heads to a modern society. Polluted fumes and water pouring out to the oceans or absorbing into the soil lead to disastrous environment for every creature including trees, animals and humans. Needless to say, these factors contribute to the raising global warmth.
When all is said and done, the environment at the present requires a huge amount of effort to rebuild the original situation. Initially, planting more trees is strongly recommended to create more fresh air and cool down the temperatures. In addition, it is irreplaceable that new filter systems need to be invented to apply in the industrial zones. Moreover, plastic materials should be considered to change into another environmental friendly substains which can be recycled or easily disposed.
In conclusion, finding a solution to improve the global warming issue is unavoidable and pressing. Obviously, it is the duty of everyone in the world to protect the planet. Understanding the causes, people in all fields and ages could choose a suitable way for each to maintain the clean inhabitant and even make it more liveable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...being cut down for housing and industry everyday. As the result, the amount of carbon ox...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended creating'.
Suggestion: recommended creating
...tially, planting more trees is strongly recommended to create more fresh air and cool down the temper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92191510577 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641196013289 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4706584575 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111896411587 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340246436554 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368139388171 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627936585869 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251732764781 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.