YOUR COMPANY RECENTLY USED A HOTEL FOR AN IMPORTANT MEETING. THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH FACILITIES IN THE MEETING ROOM.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE HOTEL MANAGER: IN YOYUR LETTER
- GIVE DETAILS ABOUT THIS MEETING
- DESCRIBE PROBLEM WITH THE MEETING ROOM FACILITIES
- SEE WHAT YOU WANT THE MANGER TO DO
Dear: manager of hotel
how are you
i m glade to contact with you
but during the meating from my company about improvement products with managers of departments and director of company so it's very important meating to put plane to improve our products to can win the compitions with other companys and increas year sells to be great copmany
but we have some problem in meeting room in your hotel at frist the chairs not comfartable and the lite not strong and not clear and the voice of microphone not clear and low
so we are very sory to rent your meeting room in next time .
if you make some improvements in it like change chairs , lite and microphone we will be happy and you dont lose any coustomers in the future
our dirctor was very angry from the hotel
thank you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear: manager of hotel how are you i m glade to contact with you but duri...
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...om my company about improvement products with managers of departments and directo...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d increas year sells to be great copmany but we have some problem in meeting room...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we have some problem in meeting room in your hotel at frist the chairs not comfa...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he voice of microphone not clear and low so we are very sory to rent your meeting...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...oice of microphone not clear and low so we are very sory to rent your meeting r...
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Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y to rent your meeting room in next time . if you make some improvements in it ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...rent your meeting room in next time . if you make some improvements in it like ...
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Line 13, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t time . if you make some improvements in it like change chairs , lite and micr...
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Line 13, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e improvements in it like change chairs , lite and microphone we will be happy an...
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Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and microphone we will be happy and you dont lose any coustomers in the future ou...
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Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...u dont lose any coustomers in the future our dirctor was very angry from the hote...
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Line 15, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur dirctor was very angry from the hotel thank you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53146853147 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32326802507 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 16.3608247423 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.5 44.8134815571 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.0 76.5299724578 423% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.5 16.8248392259 425% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212112254601 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146783442791 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108443407338 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101461096164 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558200405066 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 8.37731958763 426% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 70.7449484536 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 7.45979381443 383% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 8.54432989691 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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