Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
People have different views on global warming concern. However, while some people believe that it is the government responsibility to deal with global warming, others think that is the individual duties. This essay will discuss these viewpoints in order to determine the best options.
On the one hand, it is said that global warming concern should be solved by a government who has authority to enforce new legislation to control against the dramatic rise in global warming, which is caused by greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide and methane that are released into the atmosphere and makes ecosystem impaired and results in global warming. For instance, the stricter law implemented by the government for deforestation, the less number of trees will be cut in the near future, so the earth's atmosphere will remain constant.
On the other hand, a small contribution by individuals also matters a lot, in order to decrease global warming. For example, people should prefer walking over carrying a car towards a small distance or just in an emergency they can use a car. Also, the amount of electricity is used less in the form of switching off the lights if it is not required, resulting in less burning of fossil fuels such as oil and gas which are used for the production of the electricity.
To sum up, while some think that the global warming issue should be resolved by the government as it has the power to implement strict laws against deforestation, others argued that it is the duty of an individual in the society as a little contribution is sometimes enough to curb global warming. In my opinion, both the individual and government collaborative efforts should be adopted to tackle the global warming problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8180794135 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9202397709 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263582480704 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111538489577 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865932109389 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167059618991 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886794173197 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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