Some people say that government should control tightly the use of freshwater. Other say that individuals should use as much as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A commonly held belief is that authority should strict to control about the use of freshwater,others argue that individuals can use as much water as they can afford.While I accept that individuals should use be freely,I would argue that water is controlled tightly.
On the one hand, individuals who could afford to pay for living expenses such as foods,water bills ,house.To be more precise,people should be allowed to use freely because it is their interest.Furthermore
,people use water for different purposes and need different amount of water. The most conspicuous case in point is that a family with 8 members would need more water than a 4 member family.Therefore,it is undoubtedly hard for authority to determine a level of water using for everyone.
On the other hand,there are various compelling reasons why authority need to strict about using water.To begin with,there are a growing amount of water is being limited.In other words,currently, a great deal of companies or industries are discharging contaminants into rivers without treatment.Lead to the pollution of water is made people do not have clean water for using.Other than that,if water is controlled by government,people’s awareness would raise about the importance of water.Therefore, people are likely to eliminate using water freely instead of being aware to protect and save water.
In conclusion, although individuals should use as much as they want
,water should be controlled tightly.I believe that both viewpoints are indispensable about water policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52100840336 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59317157952 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.26134542 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.8 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6 20.7667163134 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.2 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227244317002 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169872259911 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108415197115 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174044567948 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117147564455 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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