Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, with the presence of technology and modernization many jobs has been replaced by machines and new position showed up but require a minimum degree of BA. People still have the thought that the future will provide new choices. Few humans still think that there are lots of options available but there is some that that are disappearing.
To begin with, new opportunities are being established in our recent century and it provides a lot of new educated people. In the past, to build a home from A to Z you needed only an engineer, architect and a plumber but now you need more individuals like an interior designer, painter (for walls), water proofer, electrician, landscaper and tiler etc. In addition to the new trends of media especially the social media, for example if you own a restaurant and you need it to spread around the world rapidly, you will need extra workers aside from the ones that work inside the restaurant that means you should provide a photographer, graphic designer, and a social media competent. These three new options are the latest fashion of the century.
On the other hand, machines or robots had replaced many human work and choices became limited. Today, a person that owns a land has less farmers than in the previous times, their numbers are limited due to the presence of trucks and machines. Also factories used to have huge numbers of employees and ow countable individuals. For example, in a juice factory a person used to squeeze the fruit then the other one takes it and puts it in a dry bowl, the next person grabs a ca or a glass bottle and fills it with juice and the last person closes the cup and puts it in the box. Nevertheless, now the individual’s work has been extinct due to the presence of machines that are provided in every factory and make the rate of workers limited.
In conclusion, in our recent time people still believe that many choices are available due to the existence of technology that pop up new opportunities. However, many choices had vanished due to modernization. Overall, we cannot say that choices are limited but new opportunities is available for educated people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... of options available but there is some that that are disappearing. To begin with, n...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun farmers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d. Today, a person that owns a land has less farmers than in the previous times, the...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...to the presence of trucks and machines. Also factories used to have huge numbers of ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80428954424 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73533081335 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514745308311 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1061101095 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.466666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125375063432 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419527246637 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341592221838 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792177450005 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332300586065 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.